Tuesday 22 November 2011

Miss Hancock Limmerick

To Ms. Hancock,

A school bus ran over my teacher
She lay flat like some road kill creature
I feel sad and alone
I cry and I moan
And soon I'll go out and avenge her!


I can't think of a more fitting piece of writing to dedicate to you. Thank you Ms. Hancock.

Charlotte

4 comments:

  1. Her and creature are close enough to rhyming.

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  2. Funny limerick. Keep up the good writing.

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  3. Funny and unexpected... Nice job! =D

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  4. Funny poem, very unexpected, but pleasant twist from the grimness of the original story

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